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Good Hunting--Part 2 (Vore, Endo)

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Good Hunting
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The world outside vanished, replaced by a dulling heat and the sounds of the Maranaga’s body. Deep, audible gulping as the rings of flesh tightened about him and pushed him deeper inside. A resonating and rhythmic thudding of a massive heartbeat—it grew louder and louder until it seemed almost inside the hunter’s skull. And then it passed, returning to just a part of the internal symphony. The man was pressed tighter as Muur took a deep and grateful breath. His feet were finally leaving the mouth and joining the rest of him.

The tightness passed as the naga let the breath out, a cavernous whoosh above him. He blinked against a drip of saliva making its way down his forehead. Why didn’t I struggle? he wondered, still in a dazed mist. And why aren’t I struggling now? But despite these thoughts, he couldn’t do it. He could not seem to bring himself to thrash about in the tight confines of the serpent’s esophagus (though he doubted he would have any room to struggle anyways).

Another swallow. This was the final one which pushed in a wave of fleshy rings against him and propelled him against what felt like a wall. But then, with the pressure of his skull and wetted-down hair against it, the “wall” eased open and became another ring of innards. He was forced through the portal—his imaginings went instantly to how toothpaste is squeezed from a tube. With a gasp of relief he slid past, lying limp on his stomach, into a new space.

He felt weak, but reached out to the side and met the thick, undulating wall with his hand. The tissue here was slick with a moist coating, and every so often he encountered an artery or a vein beneath the surface which echoed the drumming pulse. Muur’s stomach encapsulated him like a large sleeping bag of living insulation. Now and only now did he feel an inkling of terror—there was no mistaking that slight acrid scent in here. Some of this fluid slicking the walls pressing in on him periodically was not just mucus or saliva, though he hadn’t had the education to know if it was dangerous now, in an hour, in days… He sighed. Whatever was going to happen to him, he had allowed it to, and he gave up thinking on it for his own sake. Out of the context of being devoured this place seemed dark and restful—so he let himself rest his cheek on his crossed arms and be hammocked by the creature’s belly.



The tropical birdsong hadn’t ceased during the encounter, their upbeat and peppy noise almost drowning out the soft popping of Muur reorienting his jaw. He took another deep breath, feeling his lung expand until it pressed against the living bundle inside his stomach. As he let it out he gave a slight moan. What to do now with this harmless hunter? Keep him a while, of course—there was no more underrated a feeling as having filled one’s belly. But after that Muur was puzzled about. He scratched his chin, gazing out into the sunny woodlands carpeted in ferns. He’d never expected any human to react in such a submissive way in the throes of being eaten alive. It was as if it was something the hunter had truly wanted, even if it frightened him.

Muur turned his attention to the confiscated camera, picking it up from the mossy rock and brushing off a few stringy pieces of the small plants. There were buttons… none of which he had any idea what they did. He frowned. Time to consult the expert.

The added burden of the hunter inside his coils did not hinder his travels too much as he slithered homeward, looping up and over the large boulder he’d been resting against and travelling down towards a small river. Yma would know cameras and this… button thing much better than he. And perhaps he would have some idea of how to release the hunter without giving him the idea to make another photographic bid on the island.

The last hill was more sparsely vegetated, with plumes of tropical sawgrasses leading up to the slow-moving teal-green water. Somewhere upstream a small fish jumped, causing a stir in the water flies and surface-skimming beetles, but otherwise the scene was peaceful. Muur braced his way downhill with an arched coil, teetering slightly with the added bulkiness in his middle but reaching the bottom without spilling over. The den that he and Yma shared was tucked away a bit downstream on the flood-safe side of a high bank. He was making good time.



Muur’s passenger writhed and rolled over in surprise, bracing his feet and hands all on various points of the stomach walls. The serpent was mobile, the sensations—strange. Underneath him he could feel those powerful serpentine abdomen muscles flexing and gripping around the earth and its obstacles. The long body itself  bent and weaved, sides pushing off against the ground to find extra speed. He’d never thought about what a snake’s power to move over land without the benefit of legs would be like from the inside. But he didn’t have much peace to be mystified by it, trying instead to remain level and not be sloshed around by the movement.

Where is he going? The hunter thought, gasping as his hand slipped and he was pushed into tighter confines by a powerful contraction of the guts. After swallowing something my size he wouldn’t have a reason to go anywhere... Not for a few days, at least.  Hope was not something his racing thoughts had stumbled on yet, but that was about to change as he felt the slithering motions come to a steady halt, and voices faintly reached him from outside of the Maranaga.

“Ah, what’ve you got?” The muffled voice was pipe-y, jovial. Something brushed by the large Maranaga’s belly and pressed in on the stomach walls, “Oops, should say who have you got there. Friend?”

“Human.” This voice was certainly Muur’s from the characteristic hoarse deep tone, and from how it echoed out from the deflating lung.  

“What’s this?” There was a pause, “A… camera?”

“Do you know how to turn it on?”

“Well, sure.” The whirring beep of the lens extending and the display ticking sounded, “There, done. Ooh, that’s a nice unicorn beetle picture. This guy here takes pictures?”

There was a mighty huff of frustration, and a moment of quiet. It was broken by a tittering laugh.

“What, what? I like pictures!”

“Just go through and see if there’s any of naga.” Muur’s voice had a pleading tone to it now. Whatever was against the belly bulge pressed a little closer, causing the hunter to momentarily grumble and push back with both hands for more space.

Blip, blip, blip… The hunter could hear the buttons of his own camera being used by his captors only feet away. There was a silence which lasted several minutes.

“Narcissism be damned, but there’s no pinups of you in here, Muur-y boy!”

“Ughh… Yma…”

“Too bad about that. Hey—maybe we should take some? You do look fine with a full tummy.~”

Yma,” Muur’s voice was gruff. “This isn’t even our camera. And also we’re not exactly ‘in private’…”

“Haw, shy Muur.~” The voice purred, clearly amused by Muur’s embarrassment, “But tell me—what’s the plan for this photographer fella then?”

“I was hoping you had an idea,” Muur’s body stretched and straightened out, pressed still against the object that had to be Yma. “We have to protect ourselves. You know.”

“You know I know.” Something prodded at the hunter sharply, and it apparently came as a surprise to the naga as well as the flesh tensed and twitched at it, “Why not just hock ‘im up back on his boat and tell him to scoot?”

“You know that’s not enough.”

“Isn’t it, though?” Yma was speaking softly, “Are you that afraid of one photographer? He’s barely even kickin’ in there.”

“I know. It’s not what I expected.” Muur grumbled, “I was hoping this would scare him off, but…”

There was a sound of snickering. The man blinked and wiped moisture from his face as he tried to process the information trickling in through the innard walls. They were talking about him. Discussing releasing him? It seemed tremendously unlikely—carnivorous monsters don’t give up their prey. But if this naga had never intended for him to be food then that was not reliable. And again, that was assuming these creatures were carnivorous monsters.

“…E-excuse me? Can I say something..?”

The conversation going on around him halted. The hunter had a feeling that the two naga were giving each other one of those “looks”. He thumped the wall above him, rigid from many rows of ribs and the serpentine spine under the fleshy pouch of the stomach.

“Umm, I mean… Since I am the thing you’re talking about,” he continued. “If you’re worried that I’ll come back and take pictures, well… I’m pretty sure I don’t plan to come back if you’d, uh, be angry about it…”

“Err…” Muur seemed unsure, tense. The guts around the hunter crinkled up, compressing him into an arch.

“Muur’s a worrywart! He’s not angry—” And then someone shushed Yma.

“Don’t reassure him!”

“I’m just being honest,” Yma grunted. “You’re not angry—you are scared! For good reason.” It seemed that Yma leaned in closer to Muur’s distended stomach, for the voice was much more clear now, “I mean, you gotta understand this… You take a few clear photos of Maranaga, then you get more humans knowing about Maranaga. And after that—you get more humans coming to look at Maranaga and take pictures. Eventually you’ll get someone who’s not happy with taking pictures. Eventually you’ll get the word out to someone who wants some naga-skins or naga-teeth or pet freshy-kidnapped kid naga—”

“Unnnhhh… Yma, you’re making me nauseous…” Muur’s groan was backed up by a deep mournful gurgle from the bunching folds of his stomach. The hunter gasped and pushed the walls away again.

“I—oof—I get the idea..!” The hunter settled again, concern lacing his dripping brow but with his eyes sparked with a thought. “Well, you guys are assuming I share these photos around… I don’t.”

“…Never?”

“Then why do you take them?” Muur’s voice was shaky but no longer ill-sounding.

“Because I… I like to.” The hunter smiled in the dark confines, “I’ve really only liked nature and animals… other humans haven’t been too kind to me.”

He sat upright, pressing his head against the roof of the stomach and his back against the arching curve of the rearmost wall, “Besides, the way my reputation is with photos of strange animals… no one would believe the pictures were real.”

“…I see.”

As the quiet intensified the hunter began to worry he’d divulged too much. His cheeks reddened and burned. What was he thinking—he’d just poured out his shameful sob story to a pair of huge snake creatures, hoping that would be enough to let him go with his camera and a smile? What kind of B.S. appeal was it to whine that you’re not popular with the other hairless apes, therefore you should be fine with risking losing your lives and home for me to be happy with my hobby holiday? He curled up his knees as closely as he could, sighing.

The two naga were whispering, he could feel it. Muur’s lungs were releasing little puffs of air, but the sound was too distant and too soft to make out words. It was time to be roughly thrown out, he supposed. And time to say goodbye to his beloved camera, since they surely would not give it back.

Muur cleared his throat, the sudden clamor above him causing the man to jolt.

“I, ummm, I-I mean we,” Muur’s voice was quiet, nervous. “We’ve decided to trust you. We’ll let you go. With your camera.”

“What?”

“We’d rather make a friend than an enemy.” Muur gave a nervous laugh, “and a human who doesn’t fear Maranaga is… probably not going to be dangerous to us, so…”

“You’re seriously letting me be?”

“You asked to be let be!” Yma cackled, finding the whole deal hilarious as he thumped the outside of the bulge, “Just shoosh and accept the friendly barfing session!”

Muur’s belly tensed completely, the stomach walls churning and pressing inwards in preparation of rejecting the human inside. Splaying out both hands, the hunter whined before he even had time to worry about what his wants sounded like.

“W-wait..!” The tensing stopped, “Can I… stay in here for a little longer..?” His face burned again in a deep blush, “It’s kind of… err, calming.”

Again, the hunter had the feeling the two naga had given each other the “look”, but he relaxed back into the soft chamber’s walls anyways. It didn’t seem as crazy anymore how easily he’d been swallowed, not that he knew the trusting and timid nature of these Maranaga. Maybe he was psychic—somehow he’d gotten that sense of a creature that wouldn’t harm without good reason. Or even reluctant to harm even with a decent cause. They were peaceful. It was refreshing.

“Hmmm…” Muur seemed to relax, the cords of muscular tension releasing and making the innards enveloping his guest even more cushioning, “I don’t mind.”



The day wore on a bit longer, an hour seeping past like liquid sunlight. Muur and Yma were somewhat entangled in the sunning space outside their den, a bulbous lump in Muur’s coils creating the occasional snoring sound. Grasshoppers occasionally landed on the hair and ears of the two Maranaga, but a swish sent them flying off again without disturbing the large reptiles.

Yma was purring, watching Muur’s expression of contented fullness and absolute comfort with a good humor. And a teasing smirk.

The larger of the two must have felt Yma’s eyes on him. Muur half-opened an eye and glared at him.

“What…”

“I was just thinkin’,” Yma grinned like a toad. “You’re lucky! You found one of those Vorey Phils.~”

Muur groaned, settling his face into both palms as Yma tittered away. Why do I live with this goober… He settled again, throwing an arm tightly over Yma’s shoulder and hugging him a bit roughly in response. Ah, now I remember why. Yma snuggled into Muur’s chest, happily sharing the warmth the big naga was picking up from their “houseguest” as well. Muur was too full, to relieved, and too sleepy to worry or gripe anymore today. They all were.

FIN

^^ As promised, here is the polished second half~ Which turned out to be slightly longer than the first half since I'm bad at splitting things up equally. XD But finally managed to clean it up and proofread it. :D I like this story o' mine! More chances for Muur and Yma (and unnamed unpopular cyptophotographer man X3) to be in the spotlight. 

Part 1 here: spidersvore.deviantart.com/art…
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Not usually into vore, and if I am it usually isn't anthro, but this story was nice. I'm only into consensual, non fatal stuff.

It'd be cool if they became a triad.